tarsse

OOC information

Name: Toke carlsen ( TC )
Age: 20
Location: Denmark Slangerup

Experience with WoW:
i have played it from the day BWL was out;) pre TBC i mostly RPed, in BC i raided alot as the first long time of WOTLK, but i miss the old rp days

How did you hear of us?:
I have seen many members rping in the big citys and i know valestrion abit from when i lvled my druid

Do you know anyone in the order already?:
as said i know valestrion abit
Hobbies: World of Warcraft rollplay weapons warhammer

Work/student/other: im a Blacksmith

Are you familiar with the Code of Conduct?: just read it

What can you contribute with in the guild: a friendly almost allways happy person

Your average online time: from 15-23


IC information

Character Name:Tarsse ( no knowen last name )
Character Race: draenei

Character Class: priest

Male/Female: female

Birthplace: unknown ( found in hellfire )

Age/DoB: 19

We would benefit from knowing your language capabilities, strengths and weaknesses etc. Please write a short story or piece of text that either summarises your character, or shows of your writing at its best!

Short Piece of writing [Optional]:
well my grama is not very good... im a blacksmith i wield a hammer not words;)

i dont know what to write so here is something random :

He was standing at the top of the dragon head and the wind keept blowing in hes lnog hair, not a sight of land in mounth, hes men was graped my fear that they had been lead to they doom, the fog laid thick over the ship and the water around them, finaly he cryed out: "Odin! Odin! Odin guide my ship to land, be the blessing of your wisdom be mine!" he turned to hes men and said " do not fear, for tho our fate has been forged long time ago and it will be forfiled!" " do not fear death for the Valkyries will carry us to the great halls!" hes men yelled the name of "Odin" then they saw a bird... a Raven "its Hugin" a man yelled, a nother "look land!" Thorgrim looked at the beach that came to sight thou the fog, "we are here finaly" he whispered, "make ready for landfast," he yelled as he drowed hes sword and yelled "if i shuld fall in battle, Place my body on a ship and burn it on the sea! Victory or Valhalla!


Signed Toke carlsen

Duude! One of my best friends is named Toke, and comes from denmark

Who was your druid?

Quelbrin

Ah, thought it might be. You have my vote then.

I am worried about your english here, I read it through and thought at the first time the "hes" was a misstake, but after seeing it more then three times I'm starting to doubt that you've a true clue about the English, ofc we can help but there can be missunderstandings and I'd not like to correct your grammar all the time due to that I do believe no'n of us wants to seem rude. This is just my opinon, let's see what the rest believes.

i have a problem with whriting i get overexcited and when i get overexcited the words in my head, and the words my typing arint allways the same, i switch words that looks like one a nother like "how" and who" if you know what a mean

"whriting"? I am sorry, just pointing it out.

i guess this was a mistake then.

good day to all of ya and good luck out in the world;)

As said, wait for what the rest says, my word aint final. Sorry for making you think that.

Ey, this game taught me my English, I'm not one to brag, but I got straight A+'s on my English exams from Cambridge.

So give him a chance, a word of advice, when you're writing, put on the word corrector that puts those red waves under the misspelled words. it helps a lot.

And also, read through your text a couple of times to clear if of mistakes.

Ps: Seeing how you've played since pre-tbc your English should be at least a notch better than currently.

You don't want to see how it looked back then;)

See how you get on in an IC interview in-game I say

when and where?

Keep an eye out for Vatheras, Tarsse. If you don't see him within a couple of days, make your presence known to myself or one of the other officers.

As for the standard of English, it's not perfect but I understood it. We understand that English is a second language for many members. Of course, we need to be able to understand you for you to play a full part in the Guild, but we don't expect your English to be perfect.

As for the rest of you, I have known Quelbrin, Tarsse's druid, in game for a long time, since we were in a Dungeon group together, much more than a year ago I would say. He is probably the only person on my Friends list who has kept in touch and whispers me occasionally to say hello. I have found his standard of English to be better in casual conversation, and have never struggled to hold a conversation with him.

Interview went fine and Tarsse is in the guild.